School Festival
Oct 24, 2015 14:20
Today, a school festival is being held at my university.
Although I can hear sounds played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
In the afternoon, I went to the venue, and bought takoyaki and a frankfurter, then ate them in my laboratory.
It was delicious, but I was a little lonely.
Although I can hear sounds played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
In the afternoon, I went to the venue, and bought takoyaki and a frankfurter, then ate them in my laboratory.
It was delicious, but I was a little lonely.
学祭
今日は大学で、学祭が行われています。
色々なバンドが演奏する音が聞こえてきますが、私は部屋で論文を書かなければなりません。
お昼には会場に行き、たこ焼きとフランクフルトを買って、研究室で食べました。
美味しかったですが、少し寂しかったです。
今日は大学で、学祭が行われています。
色々なバンドが演奏する音が聞こえてきますが、私は部屋で論文を書かなければなりません。
お昼には会場に行き、たこ焼きとフランクフルトを買って、研究室で食べました。
美味しかったですが、少し寂しかったです。
No. 1 Nameless's correction
- School Festival
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Today, a school festival is being held at my university.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Although I can hear sounds played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In the afternoon, I went to the venue, and bought takoyaki and a frankfurter, then ate them in my laboratory.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It was delicious, but I was a little lonely.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
残念ですね、それは大学の暮らしいですね。
kanotown
Thank you so much for reading and your comment!
論文を書けたら遊ぶ予定です。:)
Thank you so much for reading and your comment!
論文を書けたら遊ぶ予定です。:)
Nameless
そうです。でも、時々、予定するのことは難しいです。
そうです。でも、時々、予定するのことは難しいです。
No. 2 120507's correction
- School Festival
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Today, a school festival is being held at my university.
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Today, a school festival is being held at my university.
Good! You don't have to say "school" because you say "university".
- Although I can hear sounds played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In the afternoon, I went to the venue, and bought takoyaki and a frankfurter, then ate them in my laboratory.
- In the afternoon, I went to the venue and bought takoyaki and a frankfurter, then ate them in my laboratory.
- It was delicious, but I was a little lonely.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
No. 3 Timmy's correction
- Although I can hear sounds played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
- Although (in the background) I can hear sounds (or: music) played by various bands, I have to write my thesis.
This post made me want to eat frankfurter ))
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting me! :)
I also became hungry for frankfurter, haha.
Thank you so much always for correcting me! :)
I also became hungry for frankfurter, haha.
Timmy
You're welcome!
You're welcome!